Tuesday, 20 October 2015

First Animatic

This is the first animatic made for our narrative project. I plan on putting together another one, after seeing the mistakes through this one. A couple of things can be improved with the timing, but that is on my part as I put this together. What I have notices that may need to be changed is the written text on screen. Some of it needs to be shortened so it is easier for the audience to read quickly.

1 comment:

  1. I like it! It's not there yet and needs the changes we talked about with Alan yesterday but I'm sure it will be a really good animation :) About the text, we would probably have it appear on the screen as he types the words in in his head and then sends them so I think that would give the audience enough time to read it. One more thing, when he crosses out what he just wrote we probably need a small pause between the crossing and him shaking his head, otherwise there is too much happening on the screen at the same time so it's hard to read. I like the music, it gives a nice pace!